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On this day,
The fourth of May
I went to the sea
To be taken away…

As I close my eyes
I think of the salt
That will be washed up on the shore.

I’m looking out my window,
And can’t help but wish for more.

It makes me want to think of you after all.
The hill is so inviting, I won’t struggle or crawl.

The clouds atop seem so endless,
As they softly sweep the sky.

It makes me long for something to stop the distance
Separating you and I.

Your cake is so delicious as I eat beside the sea.

The sweetness seems to penetrate,
As you hold tight on to me.

I feel some comfort, you ease my pain.
Come follow me, let’s watch the rain.

<3
©2005-2009 ~SmellingDeadRoses
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Author's Comments

Its about..restrictions and desires basically.
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This is just amazing, i was drawn to it by the picture which is favourite worthy as it was, then i read the poem and it was also just amazing, this is sooooooo favourited and u are sooooooooooo watched.
btw did u make the picture?

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yea i did make the picture..i had this little charcoal sketch that i drew of a couple and i scanned and put a coloured filter on it..then i placed it over the top of a picture of some sand i had..and then i put some text and a blur/spotlight filter on it..just heaps of mucking around..and i thought it fit..so yea!

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xxmarleypaigexx
[56 kilos of 17 year old Australian white female]
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It is gorgeous, it reminds me of a statue i gave to my sister, its beautiful

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:aww: thank you for your kind comment :)

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xxmarleypaigexx
[56 kilos of 17 year old Australian white female]
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Hey Miss Marley,
Very well written. Nothing to criticize. I enjoyed it very much. :) You are a spectacular human being. Beautiful inside and out... hopefully someday we will be able to meet face to face... Perhaps, maybe, who knows... I need a couple thousand dollars lol.. Anyways... I will talk to you later.

From,
Zach (SeaAndCake)

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I'm beginning to know myself. I don't exist. I'm the space between what I'd like to be and what others made of me.-Fernando Pessoa
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*I feel some comfort, you ease my pain.
Come follow me, let’s watch the rain.*

Words so true, a hug/embrace goes a long way...

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touching
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